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The retailer also announced the locations of 36 stores it will close in early 2016.

It's also pushing ahead in 2016 with an expansion of Bluemercury, the beauty chain it brought last year.

Our relative bright spot for Macy's during the holiday season was the online channel, where it rang up "double-digit" increases in sales and a 25% increase in the number of orders it filled.

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The retailer also announced the locations of 36 stores which/that will be closed in early 2016.

It's also pushing ahead in 2016 with an expansion of Bluemercury, the beauty chain which/that was brought last year.

Our relative bright spot for Macy's during the holiday season was the online channel, where it rang up "double-digit" increases in sales and a 25% increase in the number of orders which/that was filled.

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曹荣禄  
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你把主动语态改为被动语态,语法上是没有问题的。但主动语态强调施事者,即商店的关闭是零售商的主动行为,你改为被动语态意思就不完全相同了,有可能是因为违法而被官方关闭。所以不要随意改动原句。

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