网友的句子没有错,但把 it 与 me 交换一下位置也可以:
He didn't tell it me.
He didn't tell me it.
补充:对于带双宾语的动词,通常的表达是“动词+sb+sth”或“动词+sth+介词(to/for)+sb”,但如果两个宾语都是代词,且sth为it时,it 后面的 to 有时可以省略(主要见于非正式的的英国英语中)。如:
He gave it (to) me before I left.
I'll give it (to) him when I see him
She picked up the pen and gave it (to) him.
I’ll bring it (to) you tomorrow.
Let me tell the story, as mother told it (to) us.
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