1 句子写作中的句子正误判断

Listen to the East, you are to hear the lion roar. Stare at the East, you are to see the dragon soar.

这句话写的有没有错误?


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最佳答案 2018-11-13 16:12

Listen to the East, you are to hear the lion roar. Stare at the East, you are to see the dragon soar.

以上句子有2个谓语动词,listen to, are,因此句子缺少连词,因此必须加上。

应该为:

Listen to the East and you are to hear the lion roar. Stare at the East and you are to see the dragon soar.

备注:祈使句前面表示表示条件,相当于:If you listen to the East,you are to hear the lion roa. If you start at the East, you are to see the dragon soar

=If you listen to the East,you will hear the lion roa. If you start at the East, you will see the dragon soar

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曹荣禄  
擅长:动词用法,句法问题

祈使句后面加逗号和and, are to do改为will do. 作宾补的不定式改为现在分词。

这个句子有很浓Chinglish的味道。撇开这一点不说。仅说感官动词的宾补是使用问题。从逻辑上讲,当你不向东方看或者听的时候,东方的狮子就在吼,东方的龙就在飞。你现在听或者看只是看到了狮吼、龙飞的片段,而不是整个过程。所以不定式roar和soar的使用是错误的,应改为现在分词roaring和soaring。

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  • minmin101 提出于 2018-11-12 16:34

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