5 书面表达中的疑问

生活中不可能一帆风顺,你会遇到大大小小的挑战。请自拟题目,根据要求及要点写一篇英语短文。

要点:你遇到的挑战是什么

         你是怎么去面对这个挑战的

         你的感受是什么

The challenge I've met

My middle school life will come to an end. Thinking back to the three years, the challenge I've faced is how to improve my study.

When I first entered the middle school, I felt so puzzled that I couldn't get along well with my study. Even worse, I once failed to pass the exam. I felt very sad and disappointed. In order to change the situation, I made plans to ask the teachers for some advice and tried my best to solve problems with classmates. Gradually, I not only got used to the pace, but also I could  catch up with others. Besides, now I'm the top student in the school.

It's very important for everyone to stick to their dreams. If you really put your heart into what you want to get, you can challenge and make it definitely.

看法1:根据第二段落中的内容,题目中challenge 后的定语从句应该改为一般过去式,而非现在完成时;相应第一段最后一句中的is应该改为was,同样根据第二段内容,这里的“挑战”英属于与现在无关联的过去。

看法2将题目中challenge后的定语从句改为现在完成进行时,即The challenge I've been facing,当然,正文内容对challenge的描写要用现在时态。

看法3:原文中最后一句...but also I could catch up with others...中的could改为was able to catch up with others..才符合文义,因为应该理解成具体的“能”。

 

看法4:第二段第一句entered the middle school中的the去掉更合适

 

以上是我个人的思考,不知是否正确。请专家老师给予指导,十分感谢。

 

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mikee

这是学生的小作文让你改吗?来源是什么?这个文章错误太多了。后面看到作者自称是now I'm the top student in the school,让我吃惊不小。

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