请老师批改一篇英语作文

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Lots of people are pleased with the rapid development of economy, I, however, don't think so. Because it result in I lost my family and family members. I once wasTibetsky free ballooning bird. I would take it all back if I could. I will have a green life! There is no shortage of fresh air. As the proverb goes, the early bird get the worm. I got up early so that I could fly to hunt pests on the farm.  The pests always destroy crops and carry diseases. So I must stop them polluting the environment , and then I fly to transmit the seeds. I think these seeds will germination. In one day, they can grew into towering trees. After that, I will fly onto the tree to enjoy the cool. I have a green life, for a moment in time I could feel I was free!

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最佳答案 2016-06-15 15:15

修改如下,仅供参考。

Lots of people are pleased with the rapid development of economy, I, however, don't think so, because it results in I lost my family. I once was a free ballooning bird flew in theTibet sky. I would take it all back if I could. I would have a green life! There was no shortage of fresh air. As the proverb goes, the early bird gets the worm. I got up early so that I could fly to hunt pests on the farm. The pests always destroy crops and carry diseases. So I must stop them polluting the environment. Then I flew to transmit the seeds. I thought these seeds could germinate and grow into towering trees. After that, I might fly onto the tree to enjoy the cool. I have a green life, for a moment in time I could feel I was free!

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