This process is called “the business plan cycle”. In some businesses, the cycle may be a continuous process with the plan being regularly updated and monitored. 这里的being可否省略,直接写成with the plan regularly updated and monitored=with sth done?
比如这句话的翻译
“哈佛培养了许多政治家、科学家、文学家,曾出过六位美国总统,三十多位诺贝尔奖获得者”
译为: Harvard has nurtured many outstanding statesmen, scientists and writers. Of them, six were American presidents and over thirty won Nobel P...