请老师批改一下这篇作文,谢谢!
Lots of people are pleased with the rapid development of economy, I, however, don't think so. Because it result in I lost my family and family members. I once was
修改如下,仅供参考。
Lots of people are pleased with the rapid development of economy, I, however, don't think so, because it results in I lost my family. I once was a free ballooning bird flew in the
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