(1) 这不是改写,是句子的原始结构如此。作者为了句子的平衡感,调整了句子的词序。
举个简单例子, 比如这个词组 tear sth apart ,如果sth只是一两个词,写成tear sth apart 很正常,
如果sth 后带上很长的修饰语,就可以写成tear apart sth <--------好长的修饰语------>
(2) 至于base 句型是base A on B, 如 base the story on his life
你可以写作:
Jack based the story on Jill's life, and he worte it for two years.
The story was based on Jill's life, and he worte it for two years.
Based on Jill's life, the story was written by Lack. (这种分词结构,不知你会不会?)
The story, based on Jill's life, was written by Jack.
The story was written based on Jill's life.(when Jack lived in a small village).
= The story, based on Jill's life, was written (by Jack) when Jack he lived in a small village.
等等。